lunes, 15 de febrero de 2010

Competition entry

As this is a contest, we have to think that the main function of the competition entry must be that we win that competition. Therefore, I think that is important to emphasize why we want to participate in the contest, and why we believe we are the best candidates for the award.

So in my opinion, I would do the structure of the competition entry in five paragraphs. In the first, I would highlight why I write the letter, why I like to make an English course, and why I wish it were that course specifically.

In the following three paragraphs, I would give answers to the questions they posed. First, I would speak of the things I like when I study English, both personal aspirations, as the things I like doing in class. Then I would speak a little about the opportunities I have to learn English outside of class, both in leisure time, as in other training activities I may have. And finally, I would comment how I can apply in the future what I learn in the course and all my knowledge of English in general.

In conclusion, in the fifth and last paragraph, I would talk about why I should win the award and why I deserve to participate in that English course.

Finally, I think the language should be informal, since the topic of the competition permits it, but also, it must be educated, because it is a letter to be read by a jury and it is important to give an image of seriousness.

2 comentarios:

  1. It's well-structured, although you've taken a long time.
    Talk to you soon

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  2. Hello Samuel!

    I agree with all you´ve said in your comment. I think that doing it in five paragraphs is OK, although I´d done it in other way, as I explained in my blog. But doing it like you would, maybe, be better organised and, so, you can understand it better.

    We´ll talk about it next day.
    See you!!

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